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Housing and Trees in Urban Areas: IELTS Essay Question

Here is a recently reported essay question for IELTS writing task 2 and below are some ideas to help you with this topic.

Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Reasons for Using City Space for Trees

• Trees and green areas create a peaceful living environment which promotes a better living standard and better mental health.
• Trees produce oxygen which can counteract against heavy pollution in cities and create a better quality of air.
• Heat in cities can be better controlled by having more trees which filter the sun’s heat and offer shade. This ultimately lowers the temperature.
• Planting more trees in urban areas brings nature into cities which is beneficial to people without access to rural areas.
• Noise levels can also be reduced by planting trees which can act as a buffer against sound.
• Planting more trees can make the living environment more pleasant which is thought to reduce crime to some extent. Trees encourage people to enjoy their neighbourhood and be more active in it which deters petty crime.
• Trees offer urban wildlife a better environment to live in and play a part in the ecosystem of a city.

Reasons for Using City Space for Housing

• Lack of affordable housing can lead to rising crime rates. Thus by having more housing, there are more opportunities for everyone to get housing.
• Without more housing, a city is unable to grow and develop which is essential in a world with an increasing population.
• Housing is also essential for any country which is hoping to develop its economy as workers must have access to affordable homes.
• Shelter is a basic requirement for life.
• Urban space is limited and priority should be given to shelter rather than creating pleasant parks.
• Without enough homes, people can become homeless which can leads to alcoholism and drugs or slums can develop which can be detrimental to any country.

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Hey Dear Liz,

I have written a sample response. I kindly ask for feedback.

I personally. Highly agree with the fact that many of us believe that planting trees in cities and towns seems to be prioritised compared to building houses. While many people may disagree, I think more about the well-being of everyone and how we can counteract temperature rise by growing trees. Firstly, why wouldn’t anyone want to be happy and joyful? Just like that when nature is processed there is a high possibility that many people will visit the green biodiversity and find a place for themselves to get some peace. Peace is quite important in our daily hustling life when we work from 9 to 5 every day. When we get such opportunities, we feel enthusiastic and bring positive vibes to our community. Moreover, when trees are grown it hence means that there is more of the absorption of the carbon dioxide from the atmosphere to generate more of the oxygen that we need. Many of us still use cars and have the heating on every winter. Due to such extensive burning of fossil fuels, carbon dioxide is produced in massive amounts which results in higher average temperatures. If we have a variety of trees nearby it will help absorb the carbon dioxide and cool down the temperature of the area which leads to cooler summers and less sweating. While on the other hand when looking at the fact that housing is necessary, I only agree to a slight extent as housing is necessary to help develop the city as more and more people come to our city for job opportunities and need accommodation to live at. To conclude, the advantages of having trees in the cities outweigh the advantages of having housing. Hence my option on agreeing that planting trees in a city is more important than building houses.

can I agree with both ideas at a time. Like this: A good urban planning for a city gives its citizens planty of benefits like having good mental and physical health, living a good lifestyle etc. But urban planning often faces many contradictions like weather it should use its cityspace for planting trees or building housing. The decision depends on the population of the city, available space, amount of emitted polluted particles etc. Without sufficient living space crime rate may rise and life-standard may fall. Having a home is one of the basic needs of human. Thus despite other factors that depicts the necessity to plant trees, building house have to be prioritized. Planting trees are necessary to maintain healthy life of city dwellers. Trees make a city beautiful and charming. Trees also provides shelter for various wildlife. Trees gives us oxygen and takes carbon-dioxide and reduces emitted particles. Planting more trees thus makes a city more livable. When engineers face contradictions they often sacrifice a portion of one idea to fit other idea. So it may conclude that, if population is large living space may get smaller so that some space can remain to plant trees.

It is thought by some people that planting trees in urban areas is more crucial than constructing residential buildings.While I agree that growing trees in cities will help in reducing air pollution, I believe priority should be given to provide shelter rather than creating beautiful parks. In conclusion, although trees are beneficial in improving quality of air however, having a place to live in is the basic requirement to survive

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Does the above question means:

FOR AGREE: BP1: Y i agree for planting trees in open spaces BP2: Y i dont agree with open spaces being used for housing purpose

Would be glad to hear your reply.

Thanks, Soni

That’s correct. Your opinion must encompass both issues.

Thanks Liz for your reply. Pls what if I agree and For BP1 , I give a reason why trees should be planted in vacant areas and For BP2 I agree and I give reasons why housing facilities should be built instead. Does this work? Thanks

How can this work? If there is one space, you want to plant lots of trees in the space and lots of housing? It isn’t actually possible. What your view shows is that you haven’t thought about the situation enough and explained in which spaces you will have housing and in which spaces you will have trees. Explain your point clearly. Think more carefully.

Good morning and thanks Liz for your reply. I had to reanalyze the question. I feel the right thing to do is pick a side and give two points in support. Say for example I completely agree that trees should be planted instead of housing facilities and I use two points in support. My 1st BP would be how trees would enhance health through the production of oxygen. My 2BP would state how tree would reduce noise pollution. How about this? Kind regards Neli

So you would completely ignore housing? You wouldn’t explain why you don’t believe housing is important? In that case, you would lose marks. If you believe in planting trees, you also believe in not building housing. Make sure your essay tackles both issues if you are presented with two.

Dear Liz Please help me as i am struggling with thesis statement and ideas for BP on this essay,when i want to write a balanced approach.. I have written it,but i need to know if it is correct.I am sorry ,i know you have such a lot of comments from a lot of ielts students,and i don’t want to waste your time(because i know you don’t give opinions on essays on comments),i am just asking if you can look at it,if not ,i understand you,and i am really happy with all you are giving to us.

thesis statement-however,while i agree that planting trees is crucial for the environment and people’s health,i believe that population growth in these areas need housing,which can be provided by building houses. one bp-with regards to environment and health -planting trees and their importance 2 bp- on the other hand,buildings give shelter and explaining the importance of housing

is that way of answering- ‘sitting on the fence’ or is ok like this? Thank you Liz

It isn’t a clear opinion. It is a bit too much like sitting on the fence. You need to quantify – in which situations should we focus on parks and in which situations should we focus on building more housing. Think more about whether this is for new cities or old cities – for developing countries or developed countries. If you are not sure and worry about this, always go for a one-sided view to be safe.

Hi, I would like to ask if I can choose a balance answer with this particular question. Can I agree on both or I need to choose one side only. Please enlighten me. Thanks. Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

here is my introduction. People have different views about whether to use city spaces for planting trees or building houses for shelter. While I agree that housing is a basic commodity, I also believe that trees are essential for human survival.

You can’t sit on the fence. One piece of land – how will it be used? Be clear. A balanced view is a specific, quantified view. See my Advanced lessons if you are unsure: https://elizabethferguson.podia.com/

Good day! I’m little bit confuse if how can I write my arguments.. The question is ” some people think that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered species. Do you agree or disagree?” I agree, so my plan is to make 3 body paragraphs, 1 argument for agreeing that land for farms is more impt that saving land for animals, 1 for housing vs saving land for animals, and 1 for industry. Is this right and allowed? or should I put arguments in general (farmland, housing and industry) vs to saving land for animals? Thank You!

The issue in the question is about using land for humans or animal rights.

Hi Liz, I am struggling to get ideas for task 2, can provide some suggestions to get improve please.

I am currently preparing a books of ideas for writing task 2 topics which will be available to purchase early next year.

Even though you are on holiday, will you still finish and release the book at the beginning of 2018?

Sorry, I’ve put everything on hold in order to rest.

Hope you get better soon ma’am!

Hi Liz. How can I purchase the book of ideas for writing task 2 which you prepared

It isn’t ready to buy yet. It won’t be ready for a while.

Your writing material & tips are really helpful & valuable. Thanks a ton.

Hello teacher! If the statement says same people think…,however others believe … and question ask for only my opinion.should i discuss both wievs ?

If the instructions ask for your opinion, the your entire essay is based on your opinion.

Hey Liz , In this type of essays whether I agree or disagree for example I agree to plant trees I should talk also about houses or no?

You can’t ignore part of the task. If you agree in trees rather than houses, you must explain why you agree with having trees rather than houses. So, you cover both in your view.

First, i would like to thank you to give us such a valuable information to get our target. Also, I am very confused with those question which asked that WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE? It means if i agreed with the statement then I only need to favor with the statements or can I also write the points of disagreed ??? Can you please help me out here?? Thanks ĺiz😊

This type of essay question is asking for your opinion. If you agree, then your entire essay explains why you agree and nothing more. If you have your own specific opinion, then you present details of that. If you need training in writing task 2, see my advanced lessons: http://subscriptions.viddler.com/IELTSLizStore

Hi Liz, I am really worried now because i took ielts in 23rd of July and was waiting to get results in 5 of August. But the british council emailed me and informed that my ielts results withheld without mentioning and reasons. Have your any students experienced such situation and when they got results? Is this related or influence to my band score? Will it be higher or lower?

Sincerely, Sherzod

I have never heard of this happening before. I suggest you contact the British Council again and ask for an explanation for them withholding your results. Make it very clear in your note that you are deeply concerned and would like to know why your results are being withheld. Good luck Liz

I have made a short introduction on the given example above. Could you kindly give me a brief comment on my use of complex sentences and punctuations, and give some suggestions for improvement?

Planting more trees in both urban and rural areas, particularly in wide spaces such as public parks where people often gather, is commonly thought to be more essential than constructing new houses that could lead to congestion. In my opinion, I strongly agree that, the more trees that an environment has, citizens and the ecosystem would be healthier.

Best regards, Lawrence

Sorry but I don’t give comments on writing any more. All the best Liz

I would like to create a balanced approach pls comment on my introduction.

It is often argued, that the act of planting trees in large areas in towns and in big cities is far better than creating and building houses for people. While i agree that shelter is essential to basic human needs, i also believe that more trees in urban areas is also useful in every human’s life. tnx in advance.

Please read my notice: https://ieltsliz.com/posting-writing/ Thanks Liz

Hi, Liz! I think the ideas are not enough for the essay, without covering the comparison between trees and houses. Shouldn’t we firstly discuss which is more important (for example, listing the results of lots of houses without trees or those of many trees without enough houses in Body Paragraph A, then we can give the reasons in Paragraph B and C), because the given statement mentions “more important than”? But the ideas for each are separated, without connections. Did I express myself clearly? I just wonder if we should compare these two items before we show our opinion about agreement. Thank you!

For an opinion essay, you put your opinion in the introduction and then explain it in the body paragraphs. You should choose a side or aim for a balanced approach but for this particular essay choosing one side is easier. These ideas are just to help you building supporting points. All the best Liz

Your valuable comments are required on my essay as I made a little effort with your help.

Topic: Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It depends on different individuals. In my opinion, health is one of the major concern nowadays so, we should use empty spaces for planting trees rather than building aggressively.

On one hand, trees are very essential to be planted in metropolitan cities because people living urban areas hardly get the essence of rural area. Trees are the symbol of heathly environment and produce oxygen so, having more trees in your city will not only eliminate the health related issues but also improves the physical outlook of the city. Secondly, planting trees will bring wildlife environment to survive in city and produces a ecosystem of a city. Moreover, green belt creates a positive effect on the urban life as well as it lowers the temperature. Furthermore, noise pollution will be diminish by planting more trees, it can make the living environment more pleasant and soothing. On the other hand, growth is also very important building more houses means inviting more people to your area and increasing the population. Building houses can provide shelter which will fulfill the basic requirements of living beings. Secondly, urban areas easily get dense so the priority should be given to build proper housing scheme than constructing parks and losing valuable space. Because without homes, people can become homeless and frustrated which might lead to a detrimental of communities and cities. Moreover, housing is also very important for any country which is hoping to develop its economy as workers and labors should have access to affordable homes. All in all, I’m more concerned over human health as it is well said that “health is a wealth”. If we have healthy environment we can eventually grow. So, planting more trees will increase our growth as it can provide us a better and healthy environment.

Please read my notice about posting writing: https://ieltsliz.com/posting-writing/ Thanks Liz

Hi, Mrs. Liz Firstly, please let me say thank to you for your very useful website. Can you help me look over the introduction of a related topic to this? Here are the question and my introduction : Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can goverment and individuals take to tackle the issue? Intro : Global warming is one of the most desparate difficulties that human have to deal with nowadays. This essay will show a number of justifications for the problem and give a suggestion on what people can do to solve it. Please check the work, and if you have time, can you give me some ideas for this essay? Thank you.

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The line graph shows the figures in millions for the migration of people from the countryside to cities in three different countries over the period 2000 to 2025, including future predictions. Overall, it is clear that the shift from rural communities towards urban metropolitan areas is upwards.

All three countries began the period with similar numbers of urban migrants. Russia started with the most migrants (around 15 million) and over the period sees significant increases, particularly between 2010 and 2015 (around 42 to 70 million) with this upward trend predicted to continue (reaching approximately 86 million by 2025). Similarly, Iran after a slow start between 2000 and 2005 sees a dramatic rise in urban migration, and after 2015 is predicted to see an even more dramatic increase, surpassing Russia’s figures in 2020 reaching around 95 million by 2025. However, Indonesia bucks the trend somewhat. Whilst consistently steady between 2000 and 2020, its growth is far less dramatic than the other two countries (10 to 30 million). Furthermore, post 2020, it is predicted to level off at around 30 million.

To sum up, while all three countries have seen growth up to 2015, only the figures for countries Russia and Iran are predicted to see continued growth up to 2025.

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IELTS essay sample | Consequences of overpopulation in urban areas

by Manjusha Nambiar · January 1, 2017

More and more people are moving to urban areas? What are the consequences of this?

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Over the last decade, there has been a dramatic increase in the number of people living in urban areas. This has caused various issues that need to be tackled by both governments and individuals.

Overpopulation in cities and towns causes two major problems. The most important one is traffic congestion which is a direct consequence of the rise in urban population. In my country, drivers spend approximately one hour to travel ten kilometers in peak hours. This is really alarming as countless hours are being lost every week in traffic jams. Another major issue is pollution. In fact, pollution can have disastrous effects on people’s health and can lead to life-threatening diseases.

Fortunately, solutions are available to tackle this problem. Governments should provide job opportunities in the countryside in order to discourage job seekers from moving to big cities. This had shown to be effective in Nordic countries where overpopulation related problems were reduced by applying this solution. Governments should also improve the public transport network by making it more reliable with the objective of encouraging more people to take it. Individuals should contribute their bit too. They should make a conscious effort to switch to eco-friendly transport solutions like hybrid cars and use them only when necessary. If we can reduce the number of vehicles on the roads, there will be a remarkable improvement in air quality.

To conclude, although overpopulation in big cities has far reaching consequences, both governments and individuals can combat them effectively by making a concerted effort. Since pollution can grow in the coming years, they need to ensure that appropriate actions are taken to prevent the situation from spiraling out of control.

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Rural People are Moving to Cities, so the Population in the Countryside is Decreasing - Task 2 Essay

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.

Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experiences.

You should write at least 250 words.

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Across the globe, the migration from rural areas to urban centers has become a pronounced trend, leading to a decline in countryside populations. This essay contends that such a shift has both positive and negative implications, focusing on economic development and cultural erosion as key discussion points.

On one hand, the urban migration fuels economic growth significantly. Cities, renowned for their dynamic economic activities, offer a plethora of employment opportunities that are scarcely found in rural settings. This concentration of labor and capital in urban areas not only accelerates innovation and infrastructural development but also enhances the nation's economic landscape, driving substantial growth. For instance, tech hubs like Silicon Valley have become economic powerhouses due to the aggregation of talent and resources, contributing enormously to the United States' GDP. Furthermore, urbanization supports the proliferation of education and healthcare services, vastly enhancing the quality of life for many. The presence of diverse educational institutions and state-of-the-art healthcare facilities in urban areas underscores the benefits of urban migration.

However, this migration is not without its drawbacks, affecting both the social fabric and the environment. The exodus to cities often results in the depopulation of rural areas, leading to the gradual erosion of traditional cultures and lifestyles that have been the backbone of societies for centuries. Rural communities, with their rich heritage and traditions, play a pivotal role in preserving cultural diversity. As these communities dwindle, invaluable cultural practices and languages risk extinction, stripping humanity of its rich cultural tapestry. Additionally, the sudden surge in urban population exacerbates housing and infrastructural pressures, leading to overcrowded cities and the unchecked expansion of slums. This not only strains urban resources but also poses significant environmental and social challenges, such as increased pollution and social inequality.

In conclusion, while the movement towards urban areas champions economic advancement and access to better services, it concurrently poses a threat to cultural heritage and strains urban capacities. Balancing economic development with cultural preservation and urban planning is essential to mitigate the negative impacts of this global trend.

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The accelerating trend of rural people moving to cities, precipitating a decreasing population in the countryside, has captivated global attention. This essay contends that this urban migration is overwhelmingly beneficial for both individuals and nations at large. I will dissect its advantageous impact on economic opportunities in urban settings and debunk concerns regarding the alleged neglect of cultural heritage and environmental degradation in rural areas.

First and foremost, the migration from rural to urban settings serves as an impetus for economic invigoration and affords transformative personal opportunities. Cities are hotbeds for diverse job markets, cutting-edge healthcare facilities, and well-funded educational systems. For example, data from the World Bank reveals a staggering 20-30% wage differential favouring urban areas over their rural counterparts. Such figures validate the enhanced quality of life migrants can attain, propelling not just individual but also collective national prosperity. Moreover, the argument that urban migration depletes rural cultural heritage is misguided. Cities serve as hubs for cultural amalgamation where rural traditions don't just survive but thrive and adapt. The exposure to a broader audience can provide traditional arts and crafts with a platform for wider acceptance and commercial viability.

Skeptics often claim that this migration influx strains urban ecosystems, exacerbating pollution and resource depletion. However, it is essential to recognize that cities are at the forefront of pioneering sustainable initiatives. Due to their high-density populations, cities are more incentivized to invest in efficient public transport systems that reduce carbon footprints, as well as green architecture that emphasizes energy efficiency. For instance, cities like Copenhagen and Singapore have set global standards in sustainability, from waste management to renewable energy adoption. Therefore, rather than being detrimental, the increased population in urban areas can expedite the transition to more sustainable living practices, dispelling the misconception that urban growth inherently compounds environmental issues.

In conclusion, the rural-to-urban migration trend serves as an indispensable catalyst for economic growth, cultural enrichment, and environmental sustainability. Far from being detrimental, this shift is integral to the advancement of contemporary societies.

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The phenomenon of rural people moving to cities, thereby inducing a decreasing population in the countryside, has garnered considerable scholarly and policy attention. This essay asserts that such migratory patterns are not only advantageous but indeed vital for the individual and collective well-being of nations. I will delve into the financial prospects it avails in urban environments, while also addressing and dispelling the lingering doubts concerning cultural erosion and ecological detriment.

Primarily, the transition from rural to urban landscapes acts as a linchpin for economic rejuvenation and personal advancement. Urban locations are breeding grounds for a diverse array of professions, avant-garde medical facilities, and high-calibre educational institutions. A study conducted by the International Labour Organization corroborates that urban locales offer a wage surplus of approximately 25-35% compared to rural settings. Such metrics substantiate the notion that migration offers an escalator to augmented personal prosperity and contributes to macroeconomic vibrancy. Additionally, the diversification of job markets in cities fosters innovation, often leading to ground-breaking advancements in fields like technology, medicine, and social services.

Contrary to conventional wisdom, this migratory trend doesn't necessarily portend the extinction of rural culture. Cities often function as crucibles where native traditions find not just refuge but also fertile ground for evolution and propagation. Moreover, fears of ecological degradation in rural localities are largely misplaced. Many cities are fast becoming paragons of sustainability, adopting innovations like vertical farming and waste-to-energy technologies that offset their environmental impact. For example, metropolises like Tokyo and Stockholm are exemplars of integrating ecological initiatives within their urban planning, thus neutralizing the perceived environmental cost of migration.

To encapsulate, the urban migration trajectory serves as an invaluable engine for economic prosperity, cultural preservation, and environmental stewardship. This trend is far from a societal liability; rather, it is an indispensable asset in shaping resilient, modern societies.

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Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the

“around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing.”, sample answer:.

The global trend of rural to urban migration has become increasingly prevalent in recent years. This phenomenon has resulted in a decline in the population of rural areas, as more and more people are choosing to relocate to cities and urban centers in search of better opportunities and improved living standards.

One of the main reasons for this mass migration is the allure of economic prospects that cities offer. With the promise of employment, higher wages, and access to better amenities, individuals from rural areas are drawn to the urban lifestyle. Additionally, urban areas tend to provide better educational and healthcare facilities, making them an attractive option for families looking to secure a brighter future for their children.

Furthermore, the rapid urbanization and modernization of cities have led to the development of infrastructure and technology that are not readily available in rural areas. This stark contrast in living conditions has prompted many individuals to make the move in pursuit of a more comfortable and convenient way of life.

While the shift towards urban living may bring about certain benefits, it also poses challenges for the sustainability of rural communities. The decline in population can have detrimental effects on the agricultural sector, as there may be a shortage of labor to support farming and other rural industries. Additionally, the loss of skilled workers and young talent from rural areas can hinder the overall growth and development of these regions.

In conclusion, the migration of rural populations to cities and urban areas is a global trend that has significant implications for both rural and urban communities. It is essential for governments and policymakers to address the underlying issues driving this migration and to implement strategies that promote balanced development across all regions.

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IELTS Essay Topic: Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing.

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Q- Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing. Is this a positive or negative development?

Ans- In recent years, there has been a significant global trend of rural populations migrating to cities and urban areas, resulting in a decline in the number of people residing in the countryside. While some may argue that this shift is a positive development, I firmly believe that it brings about several negative consequences for both rural communities and society as a whole. This essay will delve into the detrimental effects of this urban migration and highlight the potential drawbacks it poses.

Firstly, the migration of rural populations to cities exacerbates the problem of overcrowding in urban areas. As more and more people flock to cities seeking better opportunities and improved living standards, urban infrastructure struggles to keep pace with the rapid influx of residents. Consequently, issues such as housing shortages, increased traffic congestion, and strained public services become prevalent. This not only hampers the quality of life for urban dwellers but also places a burden on already overstretched resources.

Moreover, the exodus of rural communities to urban areas leads to a decline in agricultural productivity and self-sufficiency. As farmers and agricultural workers abandon their land, there is a decrease in agricultural output, which has detrimental effects on food security and local economies. Rural areas have historically played a crucial role in supplying food and sustaining rural livelihoods, and their abandonment jeopardizes the stability and resilience of the agricultural sector.

In conclusion, the movement of rural populations to cities and urban areas may appear to be a positive development on the surface, but it brings about several negative consequences. The overcrowding of urban areas, decline in agricultural productivity, widening urban-rural divide, and loss of cultural heritage are all detrimental effects of this rural-to-urban migration. Therefore, it is imperative for governments and policymakers to recognize the negative implications of this trend and take proactive measures to address the challenges faced by rural communities, ensuring a more balanced and sustainable development for both urban and rural areas.

Outline statement:  In recent years, there has been a significant global trend of rural populations migrating to cities and urban areas, resulting in a decline in the number of people residing in the countryside.

Paraphrased statement: While some may argue that this shift is a positive development, I firmly believe that it brings about several negative consequences for both rural communities and society as a whole.  

Thesis statement: This essay will delve into the detrimental effects of this urban migration and highlight the potential drawbacks it poses.

Body paragraph 1-Topic sentence: Firstly, the migration of rural populations to cities exacerbates the problem of overcrowding in urban areas.

Body paragraph 1- Supporting evidence: As more and more people flock to cities seeking better opportunities and improved living standards, urban infrastructure struggles to keep pace with the rapid influx of residents. 

Body paragraph 1- Analysis: Consequently, issues such as housing shortages, increased traffic congestion, and strained public services become prevalent. This not only hampers the quality of life for urban dwellers but also places a burden on already overstretched resources.

Body paragraph 2- Topic sentence: Moreover, the exodus of rural communities to urban areas leads to a decline in agricultural productivity and self-sufficiency.

Body paragraph 2- Supporting evidence: As farmers and agricultural workers abandon their land, there is a decrease in agricultural output, which has detrimental effects on food security and local economies. 

Body paragraph 2- Analysis: Rural areas have historically played a crucial role in supplying food and sustaining rural livelihoods, and their abandonment jeopardizes the stability and resilience of the agricultural sector.

Conclusion: In conclusion, the movement of rural populations to cities and urban areas may appear to be a positive development on the surface, but it brings about several negative consequences. The overcrowding of urban areas, decline in agricultural productivity, widening urban-rural divide, and loss of cultural heritage are all detrimental effects of this rural-to-urban migration. Therefore, it is imperative for governments and policymakers to recognize the negative implications of this trend and take proactive measures to address the challenges faced by rural communities, ensuring a more balanced and sustainable development for both urban and rural areas.

In recent years, there has been a significant global trend of rural populations migrating to cities and urban areas, resulting in a decline in the number of people residing in the countryside. While some may argue that this shift is a positive development, I firmly believe that it brings about several negative consequences for both rural communities and society as a whole. This essay will delve into the detrimental effects of this urban migration and highlight the potential drawbacks it poses.

Firstly, the migration of rural populations to cities exacerbates the problem of overcrowding in urban areas. As more and more people flock to cities seeking better opportunities and improved living standards, urban infrastructure struggles to keep pace with the rapid influx of residents. Consequently, issues such as housing shortages, increased traffic congestion , and strained public services become prevalent . This not only hampers the quality of life for urban dwellers but also places a burden on already overstretched resources.

Moreover, the exodus of rural communities to urban areas leads to a decline in agricultural productivity and self-sufficiency . As farmers and agricultural workers abandon their land, there is a decrease in agricultural output, which has detrimental effects on food security and local economies. Rural areas have historically played a crucial role in supplying food and sustaining rural livelihoods, and their abandonment jeopardizes the stability and resilience of the agricultural sector.

In conclusion, the movement of rural populations to cities and urban areas may appear to be a positive development on the surface, but it brings about several negative consequences . The overcrowding of urban areas, decline in agricultural productivity, widening urban-rural divide , and loss of cultural heritage are all detrimental effects of this rural-to-urban migration . Therefore, it is imperative for governments and policymakers to recognize the negative implications of this trend and take proactive measures to address the challenges faced by rural communities, ensuring a more balanced and sustainable development for both urban and rural areas.

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Rural to Urban Migration Essay

In this  rural to urban migration essay , you have to examine the trend for young people to move from rural areas to the city in order to study or work. 

Remember you should start by examining the question very carefully.

In many countries, young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in cities.

What do you think are the reasons for this?

Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

So you need to say:

• Why young people are moving
• Whether overall this is a positive or negative development

As the question mentions study and work , you should try to address these in your essay.

Think about why work or study may be more tempting to younger people in the city as opposed to rural areas. 

Organisation

There are various ways to organise the rural to urban migration essay. You could for example have each body paragraph with a reason and then state why this is a pro or a con, or if it could be both. 

• Reason 1 - Pro / Con
• Reason 2 - Pro / Con

Or you could simply discuss the reasons then go on to discuss the pros and/or cons later in the essay.

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Now look at the model answer. Which organisation does it follow?

IELTS Rural to Urban Migration Essay

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

What do you think are the reasons for this? 

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Write at least 250 words.

Model Answer

In many countries around the world, the divide between rural and urban communities has been increasing in recent years. Young people seeking opportunities and change are making the move from their rural homes into the big cities with the promise of increased career prospects, greater financial freedom, and a new lifestyle, and these advantages often outweigh the drawbacks.

One reason for young people leaving is that the business and career opportunities offered in cities is appealing. Rural communities often have limited prospects for young people who dream of more than the relatively simple life of farming and small-town businesses. Regarding study, cities will sometimes have more educational opportunities, with schools and universities perhaps having better resources and advanced technology to learn from. Having grown up in a smaller, rural community for their entire lives, many young people view the move to big cities more as an opportunity to change their social life, rather than their financial future, with the city offering more opportunities for entertainment and to meet people from different walks of life.

However, there can be disadvantages of such moves. Unfortunately, in many instances, the promised opportunities do not come to fruition as the markets are highly competitive, and jobs are still limited even in a large city. Sadly the change in values can also be difficult for them to adjust to, and often young people end up in further financial trouble and ultimately have to go back to their rural homes. In some cases, they are unable to create the life they dreamed of and sometimes live more difficult, more isolated lives in the big city while chasing their dreams.

While there are potential pitfalls of migrating for these young people, overall the benefits that can be gained from taking the risk in terms of a better future outweigh these. Ultimately it is up to each person carefully to weigh up which is the best option for them before making any decision.

(326 Words)

This rural to urban migration essay addresses the task well as the body paragraphs give sufficient details to explain the reasons for moving and the pros and cons of this. 

It means the essay stretches to 326 words - you should reduce the ideas in the body paragraphs to perhaps two in each if you are a weaker writer and you are unable to write an essay this long. The introduction could also be made shorter to save time. 

Quality is more important than quantity, so there is no point writing as much as possible if this will affect your coherence and cohesion, and perhaps your grammatical accuracy. 

The rural to urban migration essay is organised clearly, with the reasons discussed first but then possible drawbacks next. The conclusion then clearly states the writers view on the topic. 

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Overpopulation in Many Major Urban Centres Around the World is a Major Problem- IELTS Writing Task 2

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Below you will find a sample essay for the IELTS Essay type: Cause and Solution Essay. By studying this Essay, you can prepare for the IELTS Essay Writing task. This sample essay is written on the topic of Overpopulation.

Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

Cause and Solution Essay

Introduction

Para 1 : ( Causes )  Overpopulation is rising at an alarming rate in major cities around the world.

Body Paragraphs

Paragraph 1: ( reasons on the issue ) To begin with, although there are plenty of schools and colleges in rural cities, there are very few universities.

Paragraph 2: ( what can be done to reduce the issues ). Secondly, the state authorities and the government should promote multinational companies to open their branches in undeveloped areas.

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Overpopulation is rising at an alarming rate in major cities around the world. It is caused by the migration of rural people into urban areas due to the lack of educational or employment opportunities in villages and small towns. Building educational institutions and industries in villages is the most viable solution to this problem.

To begin with, although there are plenty of schools and colleges in rural cities, there are very few universities. It forces many aspiring students to migrate to cities in order to pursue their higher education. Secondly, in urban areas, there is a plethora of industries and companies which provide astronomical employment opportunities to the aspirants. For example, in India, in the last few decades, numerous multinational companies have recruited a major portion of the graduates to work in their firms located in various countries. This, in turn, inspires more and more people to move towards urban centres and better career prospects.

These issues can be tackled by the government by building schools and colleges in villages. This move will make higher education easily accessible to rural people and thus mitigate migration. Secondly, the state authorities and the government should promote multinational companies to open their branches in undeveloped areas. By doing so, the locals may get an employment opportunity in their hometowns . The government can also look to provide incentives to the local farmers, and help supply irrigation facilities to increase the production rate of crops. Hence, people can obtain enough money to survive in less developed areas.

In conclusion, if the government takes necessary steps to build universities and encourage companies to set-up their operations in rural cities, the problem of overpopulation in developed cities can be tackled.

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Overpopulation is one of the most severe threats to the planet, producing economic, social, and environmental problems in recent years. It’s been growing at an alarming rate, and it’s a worldwide phenomenon. It is critical for people to become more aware of overpopulation as soon as possible, as awareness is the only way to address this developing catastrophe. Thus, the following essay will elucidate the causes and solutions for this pressing issue.

To begin with, the apparent reason for cities’ overcrowding is that they entice young people with abundant educational, medical, and employment options. Individuals are drawn to metropolitan centres because they offer a variety of opportunities such as better paying professions and better work-life balance. Also, many firms and corporate industries are concentrated in metropolitan regions, causing many young adults from rural and urban areas to relocate to cities in quest of better work prospects and a higher standard of living. Another significant reason for urbanization is the increased availability and accessibility of high-quality education and world-class medical facilities, which benefit everyone’s health and future prospects.

There are, however, viable methods that can be implemented to address these challenges and prevent overpopulation. To begin with, the government can employ the media to project the horrors of overpopulation. Second, the government can offer financial aid and incentives to those who live in smaller towns to start their own businesses. Finally, the government can also provide housing subsidies to encourage individuals to stay in or relocate to rural areas. Furthermore, greater infrastructure and facilities for rural residents should be provided to deter migration from the countryside to cities. Overcrowding in urban areas can be alleviated by improving hospitals, educational institutions, and job prospects in rural areas.

To sum up, overpopulation is a huge problem in the current global scenario, which requires immediate solutions as it has reached alarming rates. Although there are no easy solutions to the complex problem of urban migration, the government and the private sectors can address it by coordinating and taking appropriate steps such as constructing 24/7 medical hospitals colleges and setting up businesses in rural areas to improve the livelihood of the rural population.

Definition : a thing that motivates or encourages someone to do something. Eg. It is essential to give farmers an incentive to improve their land.

Definition : make determined efforts to deal with (a problem or difficult task). Eg.  The police have launched an initiative to tackle rising crime.

• Irrigation 

Definition : the supply of water to land or crops to help growth, typically by means of channels. Eg. The government can irrigate the  supply of water for agricultural crops

Definition : capable of working successfully; feasible. Eg. The proposed investment was viable for the benefits of the company

Definition : directing one’s hopes or ambitions towards becoming a specified type of person. Eg . He is aspiring to create a masterpiece one day.

• Migrate / Migration

Definition : move to a new area or country in order to find work or better living conditions. Eg. The rural populations have migrated to urban areas for better livelihood.

Definition : a large or excessive amount of something. Eg. There were a plethora of subcommittees to join.

• Astronomical 

Definition : extremely large. Eg. He wanted to be compensated with an astronomical fee for his losses.

Definition : the possibility or likelihood of some future event occurring. Eg. There was no prospect of reconciling with his friends and family at the event.

Definition : less severe, serious, or painful. Eg . Various government schemes have helped to mitigate unemployment issues in the country.

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Band 4+: overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. what are the problems faced by urban people due to overpopulation? suggest ways by which governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

Nowadays, many difficulties faced by local people because numbers of people have moved to cities looking for better career paths and job prospects. In forthcoming paragraph, I have included numerous issues and solution to overcome it with valid justification.

Due to overpopulation, urban people have faced many difficulties. Firstly, the increase in population in cities has led to a greater number of vehicles, resulting in massive traffic congestion. This congestion has significantly increased travel time and has also led to a rise in the number of road incidents. Secondly, the operation of a larger number of vehicles in the city releases exhaust gases into the environment, which degrades air quality and poses health risks, especially to individuals suffering from asthma or other respiratory diseases. Thirdly, applicants are huge in numbers compared with availability of jobs, as a result, increase in unemployment ratio and further results into rise in number of crime because unemployed individuals have no option but committing crime to meet basic needs.

There are number of solutions that may overcome these problems. To begin with traffic congestion and rise in road accidents, the governments should build public transportation system like metros throughout the city so that citizens may conveniently commute to their desired destination cheaply and safely. With smaller number of vehicles on roads, considerable amount of carbon monoxide will be vanished from atmosphere and engaging civilians into tree plantation programs. Thus, air quality gets better. Additionally, the unemployment rate can be reduced by providing opportunities for individuals to become self-employed. This is preferable to earning nothing, and by establishing a company, one can provide opportunities for others to work with competitive salaries.

To conclude, rising migration in cities have cause many problems like traffic-jam and accidents due to excessive cars on the road, exhaust gases from these motorcars deteriorate atmosphere, and lesser job prospects. These issues are overcome by introducing new public transport system, planting trees and encouraging individuals to be self-employed.

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